by *RobinRone| A conflicted young woman is given a mission by a voiceless goddess that will force her to choose between her family and future. LeyLines is a psychologically deep and culturally rich comic that updates every Monday, Wednesday and Friday at LeyLinesComic.com! |
ROUND THREE COMMENTS - Set 25. Sisca vs Empress Amegallus and Guile GuinROUND THREE COMMENTS - Set 2 by *RobinRone
COMMENTS FOR SISCA
BagnaTheSupervillan: This entry seemed to have a bit of a split identity. On one side, there were big tournament-changing events that the OCs in the entry were little more than spectators for. On the other side, there was a story about the Empress capturing Sisca and Nick and Emi getting violent that didn't really affect anyone outside of the five OCs involved. I support having both of those elements in a good entry, but I generally like seeing the OCs bounce off each other a lot more, so wading through 7 parts before I got to Sisca's interactions with Amegallus felt like a lo
ROUND THREE COMMENTS1. Renata vs ResonanceROUND THREE COMMENTS by *RobinRone
COMMENTS FOR RENATA
BagnaTheSupervillan: This entry handled the interactions between Resonance and Renata very well, and the unstable partnership based on glamours, manipulation, and deceit they form by the end provides an interesting situation to explore in future rounds. My biggest complaint about the entry would probably be that it didn't have much focus on any particular story or theme, though the manipulation and deceit going on among all the characters worked pretty well to make the different parts feel fairly unified. This entry was another solid chapter in what's shaping up to be a pretty good story.
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FiG-P12-TheoriesFiG-P12-Theories by *RobinRone
Thanks for picking us up," Collin chirped, his voice energetic and light despite the early hour and dull plane ride. Rhiannon merely nodded curtly, her stony expression remaining firmly in place as she unlocked the trunk of her father's car. Outside of the smallest of smiles when Collin had first greeted her, she'd been distant and dour since their arrival, her eyes red-rimmed as though she'd been crying. An uneasy feeling settled in Collin's stomach, but he convinced himself it was just from the airplane food. Or lack thereof.
Tony tossed his duffel bag into the trunk, knocking Rhiannon's stuffed satchel over and spi
FiG-P13-BoundFiG-P13-Bound by *RobinRone
Hein eyed Frost, strolling casually across the emptied dance floor. Frost, for his part, made himself comfortable on his pile of wreckage. They regarded one another for a moment, like two stray dogs meeting in the street. Hein's eyes widened in recognition.
"," he said, making quotations in the air with his fingers. He leered at Frost, showing off needle-sharp fangs. "" he spat, lunging at Frost with inhuman speed. Hein's intended meal simply looked at him with a bored expression, and as the vampire's first step left the ground time...
...slowed...
...down.
The world was completely silent. He
FiG-P14-IntroductionsFiG-P14-Introductions by *RobinRone
"Are you sure you can't be more specific than this?"
Collin sighed, rubbing at the bridge of his nose in a feeble attempt to dispel the headache that had taken root there. It had been a trying day. They had driven over four hours in the early morning to reach Leipzig. All of them had been on edge by the time they got there. Rhiannon, ever the practical young woman, had insisted they get some rest before doing anything else. Tony, ever the gentleman, had insisted on paying for her room at the hotel in addition to their own. Collin, finally showing the wisdom of his years, chose
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