ROUND THREE COMMENTS - Set 25. Sisca vs Empress Amegallus and Guile GuinCOMMENTS FOR SISCABagnaTheSupervillan: This entry seemed to have a bit of a split identity. On one side, there were big tournament-changing events that the OCs in the entry were little more than spectators for. On the other side, there was a story about the Empress capturing Sisca and Nick and Emi getting violent that didn't really affect anyone outside of the five OCs involved. I support having both of those elements in a good entry, but I generally like seeing the OCs bounce off each other a lot more, so wading through 7 parts before I got to Sisca's interactions with Amegallus felt like a lo
ROUND THREE COMMENTS1. Renata vs Resonance COMMENTS FOR RENATABagnaTheSupervillan: This entry handled the interactions between Resonance and Renata very well, and the unstable partnership based on glamours, manipulation, and deceit they form by the end provides an interesting situation to explore in future rounds. My biggest complaint about the entry would probably be that it didn't have much focus on any particular story or theme, though the manipulation and deceit going on among all the characters worked pretty well to make the different parts feel fairly unified. This entry was another solid chapter in what's shaping up to be a pretty good story.Lithicbe
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